Date : 3 August, 2012
Time : 9:30 P.M.
Place: Gwalior
Dear Diary,
Its been an year we severed off, and you know I am still keeping my promise of staying as friends.I read it some where "If the two are still friends after breakup that means either they are still in love or they never were..." What do you think is the case with us sweet heart..??? I wish you could understand how tough it is for me... When he calls, my heart whispers "I love you shona, I can't live without you, please come back, I miss so much..your smile your touch our time and everything.. But he never understands.. :( So I made a plan today.. I have written a poem to remind him everything.. and I am gonna call him now... Wish me luck Dear.. !!! and wait I ll be back soon... :) to tell you everything he said..
"Hiii.. You called me so late..everything OK???"
"Yeah, everything is perfect.. Hey I just wrote a poem, you wanna listen?"
"Hmm.. OK go on..."
"OK here it is...."
"Wow... you are a very good poet too.. I am proud of you my dear friend..."
"............. Thank You"
"OK now I have to leave... will call you later.. keep writing, Bye..."
"K.. Bye"
Time: 9:50 P.M.
So I made a plan today.. I have written a poem to remind him everything.. and I am gonna call him now... Wish me luck Dear.. !!! and wait I ll be back soon... :) to tell you everything he said..
Time : 9:30 P.M.
Place: Gwalior
Dear Diary,
Its been an year we severed off, and you know I am still keeping my promise of staying as friends.I read it some where "If the two are still friends after breakup that means either they are still in love or they never were..." What do you think is the case with us sweet heart..??? I wish you could understand how tough it is for me... When he calls, my heart whispers "I love you shona, I can't live without you, please come back, I miss so much..your smile your touch our time and everything.. But he never understands.. :( So I made a plan today.. I have written a poem to remind him everything.. and I am gonna call him now... Wish me luck Dear.. !!! and wait I ll be back soon... :) to tell you everything he said..
"Hiii.. You called me so late..everything OK???"
"Yeah, everything is perfect.. Hey I just wrote a poem, you wanna listen?"
"Hmm.. OK go on..."
"OK here it is...."
" Kai baar mera man
Tumse ye puchhna chahta hai,
Kya mera udas hona
Tumhe ab bhi rulata hai...???
Jab me nahi so paati
Kya wo ahsaas tumhe
Ab bhi satata hai...???
Agar me khana na khaun to
Tumhara pet bhar jaata hai...???
Agar me akele bahar gai to,
Ho sakta hai kahin kho jaun,
Laut kar wapas na aaun,
Ya kisi anjane se
Yunhi dar jaun...
Kya ye sochkar tumhara dil
Ab bhi ghabrata hai...???
Or jab me tumhare liye roti hun,
To kya aaj bhi tumhe
Pata chal jaata hai...??? "
"Wow... you are a very good poet too.. I am proud of you my dear friend..."
"............. Thank You"
"OK now I have to leave... will call you later.. keep writing, Bye..."
"K.. Bye"
Time: 9:50 P.M.
So I made a plan today.. I have written a poem to remind him everything.. and I am gonna call him now... Wish me luck Dear.. !!! and wait I ll be back soon... :) to tell you everything he said..
Shayad mujhe mere sawaaloon ka jawab mil
Hmm it was really sad! I wish you get a guy who loves you more than anyone. Jo tumhare paas rahe aur, vo sab kare that you mentioned in the lovely poem above. And lovely people like you will get a lovely person soon,:) My heart feels that! Take care angel!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Tanya for the lovely wish... But its a bit fiction-ized... So don't be sad.. and Thanks again dear... :)
DeleteOh I am so sorry maybe I got into reality. You should have mentioned it was fiction, I feel like a dumbo hehe :) Bye take care dear
DeleteDon't be sorry dear.. I will take it as a compliment.. :)
DeleteSad, but beautiful to write a such a sweet dedication.. Hopefully it is just a fiction :) Good luck..
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Thank you SIS... :)
DeleteBeautiful writing Ayushi :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Shri.. Welcome to my place... :)
DeleteA soft, sad poem bringing out the pain completely. Liked it :)
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Thank you so much Tani.. I will surely participate... :)
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Ooh Tani Thank you so so so much.. :) Love you angel..:)
Deletethough sad but nicely woven...well done !!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much and keep visiting.. :)
DeleteTime. Inexorable. Irrevocable.
ReplyDeleteWow..I din realize it was fiction till I reached the very end..it bought tears to my eyes and all I can is you express emotions beautifully...
ReplyDeleteLovely write up :)
Wishing you get a guy who loves you loads..that's if your still single :D
Nice blog !!
Take Care